It is a very delightful poem.
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت يوليو 07, 2007 5:08 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | The Prisoned Words |
[align=center]The Prisoned Words[/align] [align=center] Some words are prisoned and cannot be told to you I am embarrassed , but how can you feel and know My heart wants to say some words to yours but how Where I am prevented extremely by love's Jaws I am sure these jaws will be defeated by my claws Because anything can never stop love when it is true I give you my dreams , tears , ambitions and hope too But be mine and break this line between me and you I hope my thoughts and yours are one, but not two One day, I will be stronger and without any control And then I will confess heartly that I love you Where the secret garden in my heart belongs to you [/align] SaFwAt HannOuF |
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| الكاتب: | Obada Arwany [ السبت يوليو 07, 2007 7:45 pm ] |
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And then I will confess heartly that I love you
thank you for this effected words Where the secret garden in my heart belongs to you nice poem from nice supervisore |
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت يوليو 07, 2007 9:49 pm ] |
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thank you for this effected words
You must write EFFECTIVE iIt is an adjective Best Luck |
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| الكاتب: | G.H [ الأحد يوليو 08, 2007 1:00 pm ] |
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It is a very delightful poem.
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| الكاتب: | Yamen [ الأحد يوليو 08, 2007 1:29 pm ] |
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safwat really it 's very beautiful poem and u r a real poet but my brother [quote] I hope my thoughts and yours are one, but not two [/quote] i think here i hope give the line more meter so with out it better [quote] I will [/quote] and for will try to write it in abbriviation like (i 'll) for also the meter but beleive me it is wonderful and please give us more urs yamen[/color] |
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| الكاتب: | Dandan [ الأحد يوليو 08, 2007 2:16 pm ] |
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very beautiful poem safwat....like all your poems
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| الكاتب: | Naim Kishi [ الأحد يوليو 08, 2007 5:30 pm ] |
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جميل صفوت عربي وانكليزي ماشاء الله .. وبوافق يامن بموضوع القافية وتوازن الشطرين .. طبعا الشعراء الكبار دائما بعدلوا بقصائدهم لذلك عدل ولا يهمك وان شاء الله تكون واحد من الشعراء الكبار بالمستقبل
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ الأحد يوليو 08, 2007 5:58 pm ] |
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Naim_k, dandan, Yamen, G.H, I appreciate all what you have written about this notion. Thanks Yamen very much , and I will try my best. Thanks NAIM ....
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| الكاتب: | AmR [ الأحد يوليو 08, 2007 6:05 pm ] |
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aa aa aa aa ab aa !!  حلوة .. تابع لينزلك جانيسز بالمهاج قريبا
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ الأحد يوليو 08, 2007 6:30 pm ] |
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اقتباس:
جانيسز
الحمد لله نجحت بموادو بس عنا هوي ع المقارن
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